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WOW lol very discriptive....but I'd have bit it off....he could fuckin grow it back but I would have bit that shit off. Darlin i love ur story....i think u even had it on FF ......i loved it there, i love it here and any where else you decide to post but I do hope at some point Seras will grow some balls....I hope she learned sumthing from that encounter with Alucard

*grins slowly* This story makes me happy.
A M/s Alucard/Seras story makes me very, VERY happy XD
I can understand the lack of updates, I haven't updated in, uh, well, quite a while myself^_^;
Anyway, keep up the excellent writing, the wonderful Master!Alucard and the fiesty!Seras, I have a good feeling about this plot!
Plus, thank you for getting Sera's to adopt the cat. Pretty much all of my felines suffered the same fate before I got my greedy hands on them(I've gotten them from the back of highschools, abondened on beaches, in boxes on the side of the road, garbage dumps) and now they're all fat, sleep the day away and are in their 'golden' years^_^

Damn company i wish i could kick their ass for you because i just found this story and i need more. and what the hell is up with kids these day. they all need a good beating and you can't beat them cause you'll end up in jail these day =(

This story is awesome. I don't remember the anime much because I'm a bit obsorbed with the manga so I can't really say if Alucard is OOC but SOMETHING, I can't quite pin it, is off. Anyway, it doesn't bother me at all, it's just while reading your author's note in one of the chapters (not the sole author's note) I realized that he sort of was.

It's pretty hot how Seras gets turned on by him so easily. It's pretty comical, too. You've got a nice style. I didn't notice at first until the 3rd chapter that you forget to put a period when someone's finished talking. XD I'd give you a quote but I'm a little lazy. DX

I'm sorry you can't update! I hope the computer company gives you a nice new screen. X_x I hope mine never breaks. You've gotta be careful with plasma I guess. I dunno. Ehhh I'm sure it's awkward typing up something like this in a public place. You're brave.

So, I caught a small mistake towards the end:

Was Seras some kind of substitute for His Mistress? He couldn’t have her, so He tried to have Seras instead? She didn’t understand, what did He want from her? Did he want to humiliate her?

The "he" in the final sentence was not capitalized.

I appreciate the use of the "He" and "His" and "Him"'s all capitalized. I think it adds a touch that most of the D/s fics in this genre are lacking, especially the ones written from a sub's perpective.

Hi there! I've only managed to read the first chapter so far, but it's sounding awesome! I can't wait to read some more, but unfortunately, even vampires have to sleep! (Jk, but I do need sleep)
You did say that you don't mind constructive critisism, which is good, because you'd be getting it anyways (no offence or anything meant here)..
I find that having no spaces in between the paragraphs makes it a little more difficult to read, especially when trying to scroll down the page. So, my suggestion is if you spaced out the paragraphs more, hit enter twice at the end of each paragraph instead of once, it would make the story look a lot tidyer and make it easier on the reader's eyes.
I'm sorry that I can't offer more on the way of "I love the story!" at the moment, since I have yet to finish reading what's written, but I can tell you that I am definately looking foreward to reading more once I'm more awake!

~*Angel*~

Hi again!
Okay, now that I've finished reading what's written, I would like to say...
Wow. Tis very hot! I can't wait until the next chapter!
I noticed that someone had said that Alucard was OOC. I don't notice, but I've also only watched three anime and read one manga (a LONG time ago) so it'd take alot for me to notice any OOC-ness, but I'm still loving how it's written.
It's almost like he's suddenly decided to make her comfortable with her new situation, by any means possible. It's great!
Keep writing, and I'm sorry about your moniter... damn compainies taking their time!
Until we meet again,
~*Angel*~

This is turning out to be a wonderful story. I do hope you continue. :o)

please continue it has been a while since i found a good seras and alucard story. I can not wait to read more. please update soon.

I loves it!!!!!! That being said... Keep it up :)