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wow! so when's she 'getting to know' our beloved darien?

hey, i just finished reading your story. um......... first things first, i want you to know that you've got quite an 'interesting' beginning to a story. it certainly puts a lemony twist to the 'forced marriage' scenario. and you know what? you've certainly got my attention. horniness aside, equating sexual activity with the awakening of her powers is genius! in the romantic sense, serena was only able to access the crystal and her powers when she realized her love for darien. at least, that's how it sort of went in the manga and anime. your decision to include sexual maturity certainly spiced things up a bit. also, this could serve as a very good groundwork for the turbulent start of their relationship. overcoming the obstacles may then become an integral flow for the story.

i hope i see the continuation for this story real soon! ^ _ ^

Wohoo! Awesome! I hope you update soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?