rate_review Reviews

I like how Jin stole the dominent position! Very cool story!

Ooo, very nice. I liked how the dominance play was mixed in with the pain and blood. I also really enjoyed how Jin thought of Mugen, as a dirty mongrel. Well done, thank you.

Hmmm weird i didn't review this but i know i read it before. I think that not enough of people really talk about how Mugan would look like, for real. Your description makes sense, i like the details of it too. I like the contrast between the formal, well mannered jin, and the pirate. Of course he would be dirty, he is of the streets, he is a pirate, a rogue, i think its just that others try to make him have this ideal body..etc.and you went with the more realistic description. I mean i still consider Mugan hot in a way, his hair, his tan skin, his lean body, but i like your description of him because it matches his personality, his uncaring, what ever goes, attitude towards everything. So dont let others get to you, this is orignial and more realistic view. Will there be more? lol. I know the readers always want more. "P

Yeah... I didn't like how you made Mugen so dirty. I believe he would actually be more clean then what you described. But hey, it's your story. It just lost me when I kept reading how impossibly dirty he is yet they still fuck. And how can the ass be the most cleaniest part of him if everything else is nasty? If he doesn't take care of his nails and teeth and doesnt bathe, then why would his ass be clean? I dont think so.

Oh wow! Excellent!

*fans self* Yes, very hot. I liked it!

Well written as well. Good grammar and sentence structure, so I commend you for that.

Gotta love some good ole Jin/Mugen action. You did an adept job at keeping them in character.

WOW. THIS IS THE FIRST FIC TO FIND IT TOTALLY IN CHARACTER. IT WAS HOT, IT WAS SEXY, AND IT ABOVE ALL WAS A BATTLE BETWEEM THE TWO CHARACTERS.

God, I'm not even into yaoi, but the way you write it is SO freaking hot! O_O lol Strange how one person can make it worth reading, neh? ;0)