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for The Jaws of Loneliness

by Grudge

person Dracania
schedule November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You should continue this
Please do
person Aresy
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the second chapter!! Sorry, i didn't even notice u wrote it after i reviewed the first time. Wow. Aww it was perfect!! I loved the scene at the lake!!! hot! D is perfect. Link of course is lovely. I like how u went with this. That D saved Links life again, kind of showing that he actually might care. Again, i would love if you continued..it just seems that the story could have more, espeically from the last few lines at the end of chapter 2. I would love to read more and will look forward to the next chapter.
person Aresy
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm..yes i also can agree that writing for these two is not easy at all. Maybe u can make Link the hero of the day this time hehe. Also, you can introduce / add more characters into the story and have some kind of conflict which will make the two have to work together and have to deal with others who notice the attraction that they have towards one another.
person Aresy
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow lovely!!! ^_^ I seen the movie and though they would be awesome as a couple. ^_^ I haven't read the book, but i might do so. Very well written. Awww...please continue??! I would love to see a little more between them. D is so calm and quiet..hmm..it would be nice to see him a little different besides that hehe. *evil grin*
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was decent, albeit brief in descriptions.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have you considered a bunch of bounty hunters after links's head? The hunters dont exactly have to be human....
person Felixia
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah! AT LAST! I've found a story D/Meier with D being seme ~<3 I can die happy!

As you asked for suggestions, then maybe D should recive his payment and maybe... take a break? 20 mln $ should last him despite the prices for at LEAST 3-4 months (.-.?). Let's assume that Meier convinced him to visit his castle... you virtualy cutted the end of the story with that love confession in hot springs... argh...

Anyway! Write some more!
Love and kisses for writng this fic xD :3
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOORE! Please more! we need re stuff like this on this part of the site aas for an idea....Well Meyer would have another safe house some where wouldn't he? HE could take D there and well...things happen. *hinthintwinkwink*
person feidragonlover
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
D to the rescue ^^. Good job of keeping D in character, and his irritating pain in the ass hand too^^. and WOOT for killing of charlotte.
person Moyima
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Very sweet story. Please continue!

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