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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not as porny as the predecessor, true! But pleeeaaase let the poor boy have his violent orgasm with Toya pinning him down! - or pinning him to any solid object...
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
9 out of 10 aff readers agree, this needs more porn! :P will there be a 3rd installment?
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SNAPPLE!
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*kicks AFF in the arse* *HARD*
Hokay. I've got to say that this is one of my favorite pairings ever. Thank you ever so much for writing this. <333 Anywho, the style is a bit choppy, but that might've been the intent. It works out in a spectacular way. Syaoran in this is a little OOC, but since it's fanfiction and it's your vision, that can be overlooked. I just can't get the mental picture of Syaoran and Touya making out like rabid bunnies while Sakura's off in la-la land out of my head now. XD But yeah. Great work. You're a master at getting someone worked up enough to squirm around in discomfort.
Hokay. I've got to say that this is one of my favorite pairings ever. Thank you ever so much for writing this. <333 Anywho, the style is a bit choppy, but that might've been the intent. It works out in a spectacular way. Syaoran in this is a little OOC, but since it's fanfiction and it's your vision, that can be overlooked. I just can't get the mental picture of Syaoran and Touya making out like rabid bunnies while Sakura's off in la-la land out of my head now. XD But yeah. Great work. You're a master at getting someone worked up enough to squirm around in discomfort.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! boy like totally this got to be a perfect sequeal. I totally enjoyed each and every moment of it. LOL you could even make it a series, Oh! come on you know you want to... We all want to read more of this pairing. There aren't much of these.
Geez! I could have reviewed you earlier but I couldn't find any review link until I just noticed it beside the rate button. Not very intelligent, am I? lol this is my first review on this website. I guess if you would update or write another story is it possible for you to e-mail me a notifier.? PLZ
Geez! I could have reviewed you earlier but I couldn't find any review link until I just noticed it beside the rate button. Not very intelligent, am I? lol this is my first review on this website. I guess if you would update or write another story is it possible for you to e-mail me a notifier.? PLZ
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please more....please please please!
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww, thankyou so much for doing a sequel! They need more touya/syao romances! and this ones just too cute! especially when syaoran stopped and tugged at touya's sleeve. so innocnet and cute, like a child. It was so funny.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, I'm glad to see this sequel. they're getting a little more... out there? xD I hope there's another one. :o I love your writing.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* if your going to insist on being cruel to not tease!! Agggh!! You do a realy could job of letting the reader know how syaoran feels!! :P Plus, I hadnt even thought about these to as a couple (Now its extremely wrong to ever think of them as not) and then you make this cute little chapter and then a sequel and I want another chapter!! your realy good at first person and have realy good structures to your chpaters! So I know u can!!
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