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by Rhonda

person my opinion
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo lame.
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the funniest thing EVER!! I have enjoyed all your Gravitation stories (except The Rose Line - haven't read it yet) and this one certainly does not disappoint!! Hi-damn-larious! I just hope K got Hiro to "help him out" with his "dire" situation before all hell broke loose at NG! :D w00t!
I love this! Please update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
person SuicidalBunnie
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was the funniest chapter ever! When Tatsu was yelling at Noroki about her knockers! Lol, your story is so good!
person Chiquitina
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol thats was so hilarious!!! My favorite part was when Tatsuha was yelling in the hallways looking for Ryuichi. He was yelling all his petnames for him it hought it was so cute!!!
person Ultimecia029
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You wrote a sequel. Whoo-whoo!!Thank you! Thank you! I actually had to read the chapters an hour apart because I laughed so hard I damned near had an asthma attack. My poor family thinks that I've lost my mind because I'm laughing so hard.This is an awesome story (like the rest) and I can't wait for the next chapter.

...Now I have the Jefferson's theme stuck in my head...
person Steel Butterfly430
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHMIGOD! YOU LOVE US! YOU REALLY REALLY LOVE US!!!

Okay, what the hell was he doing to get his dumb-stick stuck in a drain? Ummm, never mind. No nookie for K several days in a row? Now that's just mean and cruel on soooooo many levels!

The alternating thoughts while K is chewing them out: PRICELESS!!!!! OH! Gilligan's Theme? And to have Lil SourPuss join in and THEN they all sang together! I died! My neighbors got quiet trying to figure out when I was going to shut up. I laughed all night thinking about this story.

And, on a personal note, I will be contacting Jesus to see if he's interested in becoming my Personal Chef.

I can't wait to see what's coming. OhmigoddoesitinvolveYuki!?! You have to harass Yuki a little. Pissed Yuki is so funny.

~SB
person gazelovr
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It was soo worth the wait!! I was absolutely rollin through all of chapter 2. United Republic of Tatsuha; Crisco; bacon; The Loooove Boat; Shu, Ryu & Suguru singin about the Minnow?! It was just too much! Absolutely HILARIOUS!! I can't wait to see what antics you have in store for them next. I really hope K and Hiro get their just desserts, too.

Keep up the great work!
Hillary
person rsd
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was so fucking funny exspaly the dick in the kinnthon sink
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! These two chapters were hilarious!!! I loved how you would put interludes of Ryu, Tatsuha, Suguru, and Shuichi's thoughts while K was ranting. This is one of the best comedy/Yaoi stories i've read in a long time!!! OMG you definetly have to update soon! Please cuz i love you!!!! XD
person Eluuri
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Azrella.

I love you.

Have my babies.

-- ...Or maybe just fill me in on this 'Trip to make N-G even better than it already is', thing. You are made of all things hysterical, and I should not be allowed to read something like this so early in the morning. -- Truly, you still manage to be the only person that can make me support Tat/Ryu.

Adoration and Kisses,

'Lucious'

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