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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great! Extremely well-written, the smut was hot, and the charries were IC. I especially like the vulnerability Ryouma shows at the very end. I think an epilogue or a few more chapters would be excellent.
Thanks for writing a wonderful fic, and I'm surprised that more people didn't review! For shame. :P
Thanks for writing a wonderful fic, and I'm surprised that more people didn't review! For shame. :P
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oohh wow... talk about payback
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing style. I really enjoyed the story. Please continue!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was wonderful! the sex scene had me drooling the entire time. i especially love drunken tezuka's thought process. it was really well-written.
a part 2 perhaps? or an epilogue?
a part 2 perhaps? or an epilogue?
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.
Tezuka's drunken train of thought was extremely funny and yet there were those slight tidbits of angsts that I love so well. Yeah, the relationship between these two is so interesting. The thing I find most 'delicious' is that is you look at the two as adults, Ryoma does seem more dominant, although Tezuka has the authority, but I do picture him lacking the 'experience' when it comes to these 'matters'. Ryoma on the otherhand is the son of a world class pervert. He probably knows quiet a few things.
You played them both so well. Tezuka was rather IC for being drunk. Always thinking and rationalizing and thinking some more. Yes, that is the Tezuka-buchou we all love.
The ending was THE BEST. *lots of hearts and fangirly love going on*
I wonder what Tezuka is going to do to Fuji, because we ALL know he had a hand in this.
Tezuka's drunken train of thought was extremely funny and yet there were those slight tidbits of angsts that I love so well. Yeah, the relationship between these two is so interesting. The thing I find most 'delicious' is that is you look at the two as adults, Ryoma does seem more dominant, although Tezuka has the authority, but I do picture him lacking the 'experience' when it comes to these 'matters'. Ryoma on the otherhand is the son of a world class pervert. He probably knows quiet a few things.
You played them both so well. Tezuka was rather IC for being drunk. Always thinking and rationalizing and thinking some more. Yes, that is the Tezuka-buchou we all love.
The ending was THE BEST. *lots of hearts and fangirly love going on*
I wonder what Tezuka is going to do to Fuji, because we ALL know he had a hand in this.