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schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
person Iarejedi
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty damn powerful. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was thought provoking. It flowed very well and I was sad when it ended. Mostly because it ended but wishing there had been more. You did a wonderful job. My compliments. :D
person apachep
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah... This was so... so... sad! But beautiful too, and meaningful! Great story. :)
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it <3 !!!
person Aureawolf
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic. Absolutely, hands down, the best Ouran fic I've read. It was also my favorite pairing. ^_^ Which is always nice to see. But wow, the characterizations were fantastic. You really got into Kaoru's head, and Kyouya's too. Beautifully written. Keep up the amazing work!
person pokezejello
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, dis is a frockin awesum story, its so psychological and deep in dis weird way. keep writing, there shud be more writers like ya, den i wudnt have 2 search so long 4 a good read.
person PharaohofDuels
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heart jerking truely! i loved the hikaru x kaoru though, i'm a rabid fan of those
person Devious K
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad and beautiful, I even teared up a little. I like Kyouya x Kaoru, so that's a bonus! Your writing style is really wonderful. Write more! Publish a book one day. ^__^
person Devious K
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad and beautiful, I even teared up a little. I like Kyouya x Kaoru, so that's a bonus! Your writing style is really wonderful. Write more! Publish a book one day. ^__^
person Espy
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My god. That was very, very good.
And I don't even like Kyouya/Kaoru that much, mind you. :D But the way you wrote this.. just wow. This has to be the best Ouran fic I've read this far, and I'm very happy that I decided to come here and read something today.
Because yes. This was realistic, and very beautiful.
Okay, my creative comments went down the drain, but I hope you'll write more Ouran fics at some time or another. I'll just wait and see. ^__^

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