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oh yea that right the girl is a slut and it is going to break his heart when he found out. about his girl friend oh i can not wait for the next chapter of the story up date soon.

Yay! An update! I've been waiting for so long. Excellent! I can't wait for more.

more more more the story is getting real good and he know now that he is fell in love with him.. up date soon the storyis real good

Update really soon please! i like wheres it going. Hurry i like very much and plot is getting good i wish i could rewind to when the story finishes jeez it going to be a while but waiting will be worth it ne.

I'm really enjoying this. It's equal parts dramatic and comedic. I'm so excited! I can't wait for more!

I love this story please update soon. This is imaginative and wow..thanks for taking the time too post it for us to enjoy

Well glad to see confessions were finally made... however I was a little disappointed that it didn't go into a little more depth and detail, after all of Satoshi saying he was in love with someone and all, and finally coming out to say that person was Daisuke. It works and all, maybe I'm just overly romanticizing things. Glad to know we're digging into this "curse" soon, we'll finally know what it's all about! Though i think I can predict what's coming... it just spells even more trouble for poor Sato-chan... Well please do continue your story, very interesting still for an mpreg.

yes that was a good chapter and i hope that nakw upstand that he love him andthe twins i hope that he get him good luck and up date soon.

Wow! I love your story, it's really good. I do hope that Riku...dies!! Eh, I can't stand her. Your story is touching and painful, I have to cry for Satoshi. I hope you keep writing and I shall continue to read!

Yay! Twins! Wow, this is very intense! So, everything is pretty much ok, I don't see any grammar problems. Well, continue to do the efficiently, like always! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!