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Okey... To be honest, I've always hated malepreg stories
and yet I kept reading this one. O_o I like the style of
your writing very much, especially how you've made Krad
and Satoshi's relationship. It's very realistic. ^__^ I
really hope there will be more Krad/Sato, because I
totally LOVE that pairing. <3 (well, as Krad threatening
to rape poor Satoshi, who keep's wondering why his life
has to be such hell... >_>) Sato/Dai comes next. ^___^

So, congratulations, because if you continue like this,
this'll be the first malepreg fic I've ever finished
reading.

I'm glad Daisuke isn't going to abort the baby after all. But poor Satoshi; not being allowed to even lay a finger on Daisuke. Oh well, at least Daisuke is living with Satoshi and he is keeping the baby for now anyways. But yesh, Emiko and Riku are such bitches. Not that I care about that jerk-off Riku. I mean Riku's a bitch whom I hate and wish would actually die. Well until next time.

wow that is great the nawk is goto keep the baby now heiwk go to try make him fall for him. good luck . be wait for more of the story.

Hey again!

Well not a long chapter this time, and the biggest thing I have to say about the way it was written is try to proof read it a time or two before posting it to catch some of the errors spell and grammar checkers won't catch, like correctly spelled wrong words. Had a few toward the beginning of the chapter which threw off the rhythm.
As for the story itself... If the chapters are going to be this short we need to get somewhere faster! This is torture anticipating something for like 4 chapters now! Filler is great and everything but we need to get down to business! lol
If the next chapter is about this ball that Satoshi is taking Daisuke to, allow me to make a suggestion then, Satoshi needs to tell Daisuke about his feelings right then and there! There will be turmoil, mixed feelings, and confusion, but that's the good stuff!
Well don't know if that'll happen or not, but here's hoping for some action! Woo-hoo!
Till next time,
Revu

I offer you my services as a proof reader if you can be patient since I work and don't always feel in the mood. However, if you are willing to have me as one, I shall try my level best.

Nice job so far, keep going.

SBT

Yay! Daisuke has moved in with Satoshi. Now it is going to be sweet when Daisuke, finally finds out that it is him, Satoshi likes. Looking forward to the next chapter. I was wondering if you could email me when you post new chapter? Thanks

This is an interesting story. I don't normally read the malepreg fics, but for some reason I clicked on this one. This past chapter was good. A few things that could've been better, though I've forgotten them since I've just read all you have up in one sitting. Satoshi seems to have been brought down to an almost pathetic level of devotion. It's endearing, and yet at the same time a reader would sympathize with him. Daisuke is a little too mood-swingy for my taste, though it's explainable through pregnancy. When Daisuke told Satoshi that he hated him, it seemed like the smack it the face this story needed to get it going. The roles seem to be reversed with Daisuke pushing Satoshi away. If anything, I'd think that Krad would have more to say about the whole situation. Lastly, I don't think the baby should be aborted. I don't like the thought of Satoshi giving himself so completely as to lower himself to a servant to Daisuke, but with the way this is constructed it seems as if that would be the only way to go with this story. That is, unless you'd prefer to go with the abortion and turn this into more of an action/hatred fic than a romance/heart-break kind of thing.

I think I've covered everything...

Hope to read more from you,
R.H.

DDX POOR SATOSHI. T____T damn. Screw Riku. Satoshi loves him more than Riku ever could. T_____T. -sighs- x_x; So sad. ):

I like this, I say no to the abortion though both ways would be interesting to write wouldn't they?

Keep it up.

SBT

I can pretty much guarantee that no one who's reading and enjoying this story wants the baby to be aborted...