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for Turquoise Bracelet

by Zega

person Briryan
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Nope not me. I want Daisuke to have the baby. Can't wait to see if he take Satoshi up on his offer to stay with him till he has the baby. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Amyrose
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!! Don't Abort! Please don't abort!! Oh god I love this fic! Don't abort! Let them have a little baby boy! and live happily together! I hate Riku! >.<;;
person Mystikal
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No! Please don't abort the baby! This is a good story! I can't wait until the next update!!
person miles
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! It's so sad...
person Jaded Muse
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Way cool story. I can't wait for the next installment. Niwa can't abort the baby. Poor thing.
person SatoDai(too lazy to log in)
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Wow, now this is nice," said Dark.

"Not when I have to see you face, no," said Krad.


lol. That's all I have to say for that part.

There are still a lot of spelling errors in this; maybe instead of asking for a lot of reviews before posting a chapter, you could read over the chapter for mistakes.

Despite that, this is still a good fic and I'd like to read more.
person Briryan
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Poor Satoshi. That was funny how you had both Satoshi and Krad faint when they heard the new that Daisuke was having a baby. I really hope that Satoshi can talk Daisuke intop keeping the baby. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
person myloveforyou
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNOOOOO Diasuke can't abort *sniff* He needs to have a mood swing back to liking satoshi....
I really like the story can't wait for the next one to come out^ ^
person WiccanVampire
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Daisuke is being so stupid right now. How does he think he is going to have the child aborted; stick a pole with clamps up his a$$ and pull! Either way he will have to cut open. Please have Satoshi stop Daisuke from trying to abort the child. And if choose to keep the baby make it a boy possibly. Maybe even twin boys.
person Zeldy
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh,yes i do adore this story!!!It's so kawaii!I can only hope you keep writing it !

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