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for Turquoise Bracelet

by Zega

person cocoke5
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol this chapter was good and i lol when naw told shil that they were going to have a baby and they both fanit . and dark lol at the way the both look . i can not wait for the next chapter andsee what happen to them and see if they get aoptsh or keep the baby up date soon.
person amy
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH!! You gotta update soon!! Please please PLEASE!!!!
person animechick
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome
OMG u should write a book
plz continue
i love where its going
plzplzplzplzplzplz thanz
have fun writing
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is really good and I love reading it. I do hope you update soon. I'm worried though about Daisuke and Satoshi, and it hurts to see Daisuke treat Satoshi that way... so I'll just have to keep reading and hope for a happyer end. Good job!
Ja ne
person Phantom Johnathan
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! I loved the bracelet idea, very original, but I do remember when people did that with jelly bracelets. I really can't wait for the next chapter, and every moment waiting is like an eternity of sorrow. Keep it up!
person Mar-chan
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow your story's awsome! I had my suspisions dai-chan was expecting when he started getting sick. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please write more and i'll be forever loyal.
person Mystikal
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol...this is a funny story...I hope he keeps the baby!
person cocoke5
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
real good and i can not wait for more of the story and see what happen does he tell the father . the plot was real goodtoandi can not wait for more .up date soon.
person ana
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOUR ASOME!!!!!!!!!!!!D.N.Angels my Fav.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP IT UP PLEASE TIMES A THOUSAND. DON'T DISCONTINUE WHEN I'M HOOKED EITHER CAUSE THATS MESSED UP. THE STORYS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person SatoDai(too lazy to log in)
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You updated so quickly since I last reviewed!!

Let's see....there was some spelling/grammar stuff...but that's not so important...

Daisuke's being mean and I don't like it! He should damn well keep his baby! At least Dark knows that they should tell Satoshi...but how will he react to the news...?

Daisuke's in denial, and he's acting homophobic >.< Geee...

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