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for Turquoise Bracelet

by Zega

person crabitjumper
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like what you have so, far i love mpreg stories!do you know of any others like this one? i cant wait to see what youll wright next!
person Amyrose
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!! I love this fic!! PLEASE!~!!!!!~!~!~!~!~!
person WiccanVampire
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Take that you f**king b*t*h Riku! I really hate her so I'm glad Daisuke yelled at her. This was a good chapter and I don't recall any major mess ups. I can't wait until you update so try to make it ASAP please.
person Kyuuen-kun
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I remember this!!! It ticked me off to find that one day they deleted this off of FF.net >.<
Anyways I love this story just as much as I loved it over at FF, but wasn't there more chapters to this when you had it over there? Or did you lose those chapters when they deleted it?
person animegirl
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it
it one of ma fav dai/sat fics
keep it up 'update soon
have fun writing
person cocoke5
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM

wow the story is real good and i love the way that naw getting sick. i love it. up date soon.
person Briryan
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Daisuke. Can't wait till he finds out what is wrong. Oh and can't wait to read what his parents and Satoshi will do when they find out what is wrong with him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person WiccanVampire
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a DNAngel m-preg before. I've only read Harry Potter or Snape m-preg and of course that's magic and witchcraft, so this should be interresting. If you already wrote this story then why don't you already post the whole thing? Well e-mail me please when you update. Oh and I've heard of the bracelet game to. I think it was back when I was in middle school about six years again. I never took part in the game but I remember that you had to break the bracelet, then again I didn't no much about the game in the first place.
person izumi Brisingr
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
have we met? I wrote a Satoshi X Diasuke as well, and that seemed awfully similar to it. I even had the line "Don't forget to breathe" funny how two people could see he same pairing doing the dame things to eachother.
person Katastrophe
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! I missed this story. Damn FF.net rules...

I like your writing style, though I'm having a hard time wondering where you're going to put Riku. I don't know, it just seems like something's missing. I don't know what, though.

An excellent job if I do say so meself. ^-^

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