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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
With spiritwolf suggestion about little chaos with date I fix it and from now when it would change their shouldn't be trouble with notice it :) After read first episode I notice some flaw (naming one person with two diffrent army rank) and now I think it's fixed too.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would say this story is good but the problem is it confused the hell out of me jumping back and forth from 12th of sept to the 13thfrom I take it being above the ocean and then all of a sudden being over a sea well this is my opinion stop making it so cunfusing I could hardly follow the storyline because i was confusing saying it was the year 2018 and then it was 2016 what the hell is up with that oh well please with the next chapter don`t make it so confusing please
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meh...
Really all I can say about it right now...we've all seen what your doing before. Not like ti is anyting new. Perhaps you might have a shred of originality in you to do something different, but I doubt. You seem pretty mediocre.
Really all I can say about it right now...we've all seen what your doing before. Not like ti is anyting new. Perhaps you might have a shred of originality in you to do something different, but I doubt. You seem pretty mediocre.