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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I think you did a great job. Definitely hunt down some more works done by you. :D
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi it's me again! Loved this one! I'm going to take a break and then read the sequel. I personally liked the way you had them save lovemaking for later and taking their time. The progression of the relationship seemed natural to me and worked well.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kiss is a great story, and Drake and JJ are so in character. JJ being so broken up about--not only about his father's death--but by the cold, emotionless inheritance he was given, when all he wanted was love and the normal praise any child desires, was so very well done and you could really feel it. Yes, the sex scene was a little rushed, but perfectly fine. It was truly an in-the-heat-of-the-moment thing and well done. Drake being able to sit down--gingerly--was too cute. Thank you for the great story. (WHEE!! I still wuuv you, Moon!!!!) Shut up, Akita!
*Wahh!*
*Wahh!*
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You don't share drinks unless intimate? What country do you live in?
I always steal my friend's drinks or share one sometimes.
Anyway nice ficcie I like cute JJ ficcies.
Could do with another chapter though in my opinion
I always steal my friend's drinks or share one sometimes.
Anyway nice ficcie I like cute JJ ficcies.
Could do with another chapter though in my opinion
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, nice story :) Wasn't rushed for me.
Heh, that's weird, not drinking from others beverage. In my country we do it a lot, even just with people from your class.
Heh, that's weird, not drinking from others beverage. In my country we do it a lot, even just with people from your class.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not sharing drinks?! That's just crazy! Everyone here shares drinks with anyone they like, if you know them well enough to be hanging out with them, you know them well enough to share a drink. But then again, I'm in good old England, which unusual country are you in?
As for the story, very nice! A convincing story written excellently with a good emotional backdrop, and a nice ending, even if the not sharing drinks thing means nothing to me. If it did then I'd be intimate with about 30 people!
Ayeshagirl
(feel free to email me, this 'no sharing' thing intruiges me...)
As for the story, very nice! A convincing story written excellently with a good emotional backdrop, and a nice ending, even if the not sharing drinks thing means nothing to me. If it did then I'd be intimate with about 30 people!
Ayeshagirl
(feel free to email me, this 'no sharing' thing intruiges me...)
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey loved the story. please let us know how drakes parents react.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love you! this is my new favorite fake story
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A drunk JJ is a very cute one! Drake is such a nice guy and they are really good together! Please more romance soon!
I loved your story and I am waiting very anxiously for more!
Kisses ^^
I loved your story and I am waiting very anxiously for more!
Kisses ^^
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww i'm really enjoying this fic ^__^ Poor JJ. I look forward to the next chapter.