rate_review Reviews

I love this story! And I love how quickly you updated the chapters! Drake and JJ is my favourite FAKE pairing by now, and I really like the characterization you gave them both (seemed very in character imho) and the plot. :) I felt chapter 8's sex scene was a little rushed, or at least that Drake seemed so unperturbed by it felt a little too "easy" and/or "sudden. After your built up I had expected him to be a lot more hesistant or nervous about suddenly finding himself having sex with another man. But anyway, I love this story nonetheless, and I hope there'll be more! :)

oo, update soon! this is super cute, i love this pairing

This is a fun story! I can't wait for the actual kiss. We all know it's coming. The following is my favourite line in your story so far:

" Ouch, " Dee winced. " I've seen him in the showers ; trust me, Ted, you do not want Janet going with him."

It just cracks me up every time I read it!

Wow, I really like this, and I'm often checking for updates. JJ/Drake is one of my favorite couples, and you do them so sweetly, it's really nice. There's something a bit screwy with the punctuation, but other than that, I can't think of any constructive critism even. I'm hope to see more of this soon!

Lovely story, I liked your portrayal of JJ, he is not only Dee´s annoying and brainless stalker most people usually write about.
I´m crazy about this pairing and I´m very anxious to read more.
Thanks for writing,
Hugs
Kira