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for Face in the Mirror

by hawker748

schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woah man this story just totally blew my mind XD. Nice
person Bagget00
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I was wondering who she was when she started to drop little hints here and there in her speech, but wasn't expectng who it turned out to be at all. Thank you for the surpries and thank you SimmyC for the typo that started so many stories that I like.
person Storyreader16
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Okay, I thought I had it all figured out, that the new girl was Naru's and Keitaro's girl, from the future. But wow. I was pleasantly suprised at the pairing. About time Hina gets something nice. Overall loved the story, good description, good directive, was 'a breath of fresh air' to say the least. Thank you for putting this one up.



~Storyreader16
person Luk-ass
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. great story. hina wasn't really in the main story so...KUDOS!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I gotta give this story a lot of lulz. xD I would have never known that that was gonna happen. shee shee shee!!!

It really was a great story, and very sm3x3h. \m/ The concept might sound really...nasty, but how you put it together really made it flow very well. I thought the ending was rather fitting for the story, especially how the events unfolded.

I only had some trouble with a few spelling errors here and there that sometimes made it hard to distinguish who was being talked about, but that didn't bog me down. ^_^

-Narshe "Dizzy Gear" Delvar-
person Samuka19
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn it man , incredible. This story unites smut with a creative plot , without losing the Love Hina feel. You mantained the characters's original psyches, so I believe that this could really happen in the Love Hina world (hell if a turtle can fly then a old woman can be young again).
Thank you , from the bottom of my heart, for writting such a masterpiece.That really made my day , week , month and probably year >_> I will re-read this quite a few times.
Sorry for my bad english , but I hope that I was able to express my feelings on your fic. Congratulations on being such a amazing writer and I hope to see a "Face in The Mirror 2" if it's possible ... Keep up the good job, you just got a new fan =)
person xx
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xxx
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i feel a butterfly in my stomach when i read this fics..all in all,i'll always support your fic..keep 'em coming..
person Erissa
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! Just wanted to tell you, though that the chapter (under the drag down menu) has a typo, it says "A Face in he Mirror" Rather than "A Face in the Mirror" as I assume it to say. Unexpected twist!
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Hawker_784 i have read many of you fanfics and There is only one thing to say about your fics......................THE BEST ON FF AND AFF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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