rate_review Reviews

This story is so sweeeeeeet!!! ^^ Update soon please, and I think everyone wants Eiri to take it up a notch with Shu-chan XD

Well, since you said no one had reviewed much, I figured I would. i'm honestly curious who threw the note, and even more so on how class 4 treats their new sensei, and how they'll react when they find out about Yuki being the teacher's aide. And what will happen if Seguchi learns that Yuki's happy as Shuichi's aide? And is Hiro in this?? I mean, I remember a mention of Shuichi climbing out of the passanger side of the car, and then waving.. So it was probably either Hiro (most likely) or Ryuichi (less likely, still possible). And what would Yuki say if he met Hiro or something??

Shuichi: "Hiro!! I forgot my bag in the class!! Come with me to get it!"
Hiro: "Okay, fine, just let me park." *parks car and gets out, walking to the room with Shuichi*
Shuichi: *looking around frantically* "I can't find it, Hiro!!"
Hiro: *smiles and holds up a bag that was sitting in the corner* "This it?"
Shuichi: *glomps Hiro* "Yay!! Thank you!!"
*door opens, Yuki walks in, having heard Shuichi's voice, and finds the love of his life currently hugging another guy.*
Yuki: "Who the hell are you?"

Aww, pooor shu!!! See what hetero-ness does to cute kawaii chibis??? I think Yuki should step it up, he seems to be getting more confident -cough- and stalker-ish, hehe.

Lol, this story is adorable so far. Can't wait to see what happens next ^^.. *Plays with Yuki-plush* Gotta have the chibi-Yuki >> << TnT

Hoping you will be writing more chapters, for this story sounds like it is only the beginning. I have enjoyed reading this and also your other stories.

Anxiously waiting for more

It just keeps getting better! Poor Class Four, cheating themselves out of what they want most - and poor *Shindou*, getting an aide with a little more than schoolwork on his mind. Wonderful! ^_^

Have you posted this on Gurabiteshiyon yet? I'm almost sure that that's where I had read it... Did I review it? I hope I did cause if I didn't I'm an ass... Oh and don't worry, this site will... be kind of slow but keep on putting up chapters and you'll see! Post it on FF.Net, those kids love to review, even if it's just ,"I love you!!! Nya!!!" Or something like that but it's a nice pick me up on a bad day. I think I've fallen deeply in love with this, really... Hmmm, well, keep up the good work and I'll be sure to review again! Promise!!!

Ooooo, I can't wait to see what "comes up" between those two!!

I love your story, I found it yesterday but I didn't have the time to read so now I'm writing a review. Please write more. However... I don't really understand why you've called it COld Play... is it because Eiri is somewhat unemotional and cold or something else?

Still an incredible story, although it seems to be missing a second chapter... are you just telling the story of the walkout and such in flashbacks? I wouldn't mind 'seeing' it, but that works too. *grins* (Love Yuki in this chapter, being punished and trying not to laugh. Just like him to get exactly what he wants for all the wrong reasons, right? :)

Also, Shindou's cuteness continues to rock my world. *grins*