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for Cold Play

by Elnie

person Anon
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOO another wonderful chapter. ^^ Hay so how does Shu feel about Eiri....Huh? Lol anyway I can't wait to see what happends next. ^^ Now that eiri is getting cloues to Shu........Will eiri want more?........And try to touch shu as well.......huh the possiblitys. (smile evily) Any way update soon ok. So I can find out. ^_^
Kisses ^_~
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOO another wonderful chapter. ^^ Hay so how does Shu feel about Eiri....Huh? Lol anyway I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^ Now that eiri is getting near to Shu........Will eiri want more?........And try to touch shu as well.......huh the possibilities. (smile evilly) Any way update soon ok. So I can find out. ^_^
Kisses ^_~
Ps
sorry that was me I wrote the wrong name....Lol sorry
person Sekre
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I love how Eiri's mind works - He's evil x) And yeah, this site sucks when coming to reviews ... especially with Gravitation and other fics - The only category that's really getting a lot of reviews is Naruto, because it's hot right now.
person Sekre
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! Shu is cute, which isn't unusual, and I like how you portrayed Yuki - both are really in character.
person Aimee
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is defintely my favorite AU so far! The way that you're doing the characters is perfect, and I positively loved the last lines! ^_^
person Grey
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eee! This is a *great* start. I love all the details you threw in about the school, it really made it interesting to see how differently they were treating the new 'brat' teacher. (Of course, the fact that I love stories that include Yuki's POV doesn't hurt one bit - I get the feeling that Shindou is going to have an interesting school year. *grins*)

Love it!
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've Loved what you have written. Lol ^^ Shuichi a teacher. Lol Funny yet so perfect. ^_^. Not to mention Different. O and I love the fact that you write how Eiri is starting to have feelings for Shu, And not the other way around. ^^ O and hay you could put a past in shu's life, ya know like some dark hidden/painful past that Yuki tries to find out. Or yuki slowly finds out about shu's personal life and about the person who drives shu to work. Like they have a relationship together.......But he hurts shuichi, or something like that, So not only does yuki become jealous, but pissed off that shu is being miss treated. So eiri not only finds out that he has fallen for his teach but will do anything in his power to make shu his. Lol ^^ just a thought. ^^ just wanted to help. But I do hope you like my ideas. ^_^ Do what you like with them. But whatever you do......you must update. update soon. Ok. Lol Have fun. and see you soon. Latter
Kisses ^_~

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