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Ow. OWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!! >_<

I don't think you could have done a better job of ripping out my heart and stomping on it...Yeah. That totally made me cry! I can't tell you how awed I am with your writing skill. I mean, this was a pain filled story and I felt every bit of it. I am verily impressed! I enjoyed reading this because it was engaging and harsh! HARSH!!!! No fluff here, but that's okay! Sometimes, we don't need no stinkin' fluff!! I'm torn between wanting a continuation and leaving it well alone. Honestly, it can stay where it's at and my poor battered heart can recover...but a continuation would be wonderful,too!! I mean, there COULD be a happier ending, but not likely with this SUPER scary Raenef. I don't know who I'm more angry with, Rae or Eclipse...I mean, Rae didn't have to be so harsh, but it's what Eclipse manipulated him into becoming and...YEAHRGH!! But poor Eclipse, having to relive his youth in a sense...being thrown to the wolves when he thought he should have been martyred...That freakin' sucks! But, hey, Eclipse groomed him to be a royal terror and Eclipse should get the biggest share of what's reaped I suppose...I'm a bipolar masochist and you've fueled my needs! Thanks!!

oooooooo. O.O i don't even know how to respond to this. i never considered such a twisted & coniving &, & just -TWISTED from all angles!!!!! wow. both of them. just....wow.

good one. *blink*

now that i'm a little over that shock.... ^_^
i kept expecting Raenef to find a way to "fix" it so Eclipse would never leave him. but now that i think about it, there would be NO way even Raenef could forgive him for changing the chibi so drasticly into such a horrible creature. so saaaad!

*running off to pimp this fic to my friends* ^_~

Sad, romantic, twisted, frustrating, artistic, impressive! It actually seems like a realistic end to the saga--I haven't got vol. 7 yet, so it sort of goes with 1-6. That's part of why it's so sad--I just wanted it to work out some how. I suppose in two thousand years or so, Raenef could try to win back Eclipse, but of course that undercuts the power of your story which requires a dark end. How sad . . . I was sort of hoping Raenef would refuse to sell him or bid on him or something . . . well, it's probably more powerful this way, but sad. Anyway, thanks for sharing--it's fun to have a new Demon Diary fanfic to read!

well written! :) can't wait if you're going to write more stuff

Very well written. I look foward to more of your work.