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All i can say is hot bam that was an itense piece of writing and i throughly enjoyed reading every chapter and i hope to read more of these stories from you in the coming new year^^ :p

Hiya! Great story (I think I've reviewed it previously - if not, I am remiss and I apologize). I have a question. I'm taken with the idea of Gojyo being sexually aroused by Hakkai's healing and wanted to ask if I could use it (not in exactly the same way or to the same psychic-bonding level that you have) in a fic of my own. I would absolutely credit you with the (awesome) idea and post a link to your story if/when I post mine. I did not want to borrow such a fabulous idea without asking first though. Please let me know if it's okay or not! Feel free to use my e-mail (which is wrong on this site. It is actually: melindacatren@yahoo.com) or PM me on LJ to let me know.
Again, awesome story from which I cannot keep my sticky plot-bunny seeking fingers...

Just found this story this evening. I am wonderfully impressed with the pace and the charaterization. Nicely done and I hope to see more soon!

Ah, the sexual tension building, the stolen kiss, the sexy demonish Hakkai - what more could we want! Oh, not to mention the hot, monkey sex as well!

Looking forward to seeing how this will continue, Des!

'Tis very well written. Usually, I read PWP's, but I'm actually quite enjoying the slow pace of this one. Can't wait for more.

I absoultly love this chapter(5 i think) very unusual way to take it and I enjoyed the conversations to the max. I laughed and clapped my hands and at one point even stomped my feet all at the same time. Fun ,Fun Chapter. Now how about another fun chapter, I could get really hooked on them. Your writing is fantastic and the characters are spot on. The last line almost made me pee my pants I laughed so hard. Excelent.

*shivers* My gods I think you took leasons from Hakkai... That's just so MEAN leaving everything at that! Mean mean mean mean! *pouts*

Very nice chapter. I can't wait to see how this gets resolved. I always like stories where Goku is more perceptive than he is generally made out to be, and Sanzo has emotions like a real human. Your portrayals of all four guys are great.

I'm enjoying this story. Hakkai and Gojyou are my favorites, so I was thrilled they were the focus of your story! I was really moved by chapter four, particularly the way Sanzo cut through Hakkai's thoughts and laid out the situation as he sees it. I think you're getting a better feel for the characters as the fic goes on and I'm enjoying your version of the journey. ;)

Chapter 4 is great and I can't wait until chapter 5 so hurry and write it so I can read it, Waiting with baited breath(and it is getting a little fishy flavored so could you hurry?)