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This is awesome! So deliciously angsty!

This line killed me with laughter!

“I can just see trying to explain that path of death and destruction to the three heads. Sorry heads, our healer got a little carried away and killed all of the women in China.”

Awesome!

=D! I love it! Please do update whenever possible! I want to know what happens next to put it bluntly! Now that it's at a crucial moment where Hakkai and Gojyo are both overwhelmed by emotion, maybe this is just wishful thinking on my part, but perhaps to settle the insecure feelings they'll get the chance to show each other how they feel? Please please update! ^^ I'll be eagerly checking back for it whenever I can.

Chapter 1 was glorious. You’re hand at building sexual tension is exquisite and I LOVE your characterizations!

Ch2 – “it was an aspect of his bizarre and twisted sense of humor.” SO VERY TRUE! So very Hakkai!

“Besides, when Hakkai healed him, other things happened, intimate things, that left him incredibly vulnerable to the dark-haired man.” That is GENIUS! That’s the kind of line that can birth 1,000 plotbunnies! I wish I thought of that. *pout*

“Closing his crimson eyes, Gojyo whispered aloud to the inky night, “Oh, shit.”

Hakkai’s laughter answered him from the darkness.”

What a great closing zinger! LOL!

Ch3- I am going to kick the living shit out of AFF. I click to read chapter three and they have “maintenance.” It’s not maintenance. It’s TORTURE!

““Is that so?” Hakkai’s voice remained steady, revealing nothing. “I’m afraid I don’t really know what you mean.”” I SO want to take that to certain levels!

“Hakkai had witnessed his roommate’s skilled prowess with women on numerous occasions, but he no longer found it amusing or entertaining.” Ladies, this is the warning signal of a Hakkai Snit coming on! LOL!

This is BEAUTIFUL! I can’t wait until you update!

Awesome story so far! Poor Hakkai! Poor Gojyo! Please continue!!! I really liked your OCs, BTW - especially Lee. I normally find most OCs annoying, but yours were interesting!

Oh, wonderful - just wonderful! The pain, the agony, the confusion - the delightful sexual tension! What more could we want? Apart from some heavy, sweaty sex afterwards - which I'm sure is coming. I know you won't disappoint us with these two lovely male specimens! Thank you for a wonderful read, Des.

Chapter three was so very good. It was angsty and delisious. I love the interjection of the girl and the guy that could read the two friends. The way it was written was very enjoyable to read. Love your work emencely.

I have been following this story for a while and I must say.... I love it. I think you have a good flow in your latest chapter and there was nothing too upseting about it. I give you a five on it. You also mentioned that you were looking for a beta. I would gladly offer my services. I beta for a friend of mine on occasion. I just want to help out. Thank you again and keep up the good work,

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I love this story, please hurry with more

This rocks so hard it's not funny! I love it!!! The teasing is so in character for Hakkai, and the mix of awkwardness and physical bravado even more for Gojyo. I literally cannot wait for them to actually get some of that contact Gojyo mentioned happening!

Oh, and Gojyo? Underneath Hakkai? Absolutely the perfect spot for him! ^____^

Mmmm [drool] this prolonged teasing is so hot.