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October 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I'm just looking too deep into this, but the way females are treated in this story strike me as very misogynistic, particularly in Pet Stage. While the female pet was being bitchy towards him, you had Riki hating her from the get-go solely because she was female even before she said a word to him. I can see him not being attracted to females, but no need to be downright hateful towards them. That's my only complaint about the story.
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, I like how you changed the beginning and kept some plot points from Taming Riki story. However I must say that I'm not at all keen at how you've grouped together lots of chapters from Taming Riki into a few paragraphs for chapter eight. I think it lets your story down a little.
Other than that it's good so far. I can't wait to read the rest!
Other than that it's good so far. I can't wait to read the rest!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very well written and I would like to say that I just Love Riki and I think Iason is the Ulmiate Seme because if you combine Seime from loveless and Sephiroth from Finall Fantasy Seven you get Iason. I would also like to Say keep up the good work.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! your story is really good! it's starting to get even MORE interesting, why haven't you updated in a while? ];
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please cont.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love seeing some of my characters alongside Rieko's. Thanks for this, what a treat!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg I am so happy you updated because I been waiting for a long time to read it. ^.^ Zell and Riki are finally getting along
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! i hope you update soon! I hope we can chat soon too
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Something is wrong with my Yahoo email and Windows Messenger and I don't know what to do to fix them
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on a fourth way down on chapter one. Not to be a flamer or anything but there are many things wrong already. I was wondering, if you don't have a beta I'd be willing to do some corrections. But don't worry, I really love everything else. Thats why I'm going to keep readin, though its in a second person's view. Let me know if your interested in an email.