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heyo^^
Well, I know you´ve written this story two years ago. But I´ve just disecovered it and I like it that much that I have to write a review^^
So, finally a Schuldig/Aya story... I like this pairing quite much! And you write it in such a wonderful way. Especially your Aya is really great! I like it how you show his despair, his loneliness, all the dark and desperate thoughts he has - and of course his yearning for someone that loves him. And Schuldig is so lovely in your story! How he takes care about Aya, how he helps him get out of his dark little shell... And well, it´s working, isn´t it? Another thing I really like is the way you describe Weiss and Kritiker. It seems really comprehensible that Kritiker doens´t let Aya go and that they force him to stay in Weiss by using his sister. That´s so typical for them. And it´s quite bad for Schuldig and Ran´s relationship, isn´t it? Argh, that´s a shame: They found each other, they seem to get closer and closer - but Kritiker is always there to endanger their luck, huh?
Anyways, i love your style of writing, and you´ve got really great ideas!!!
So is there any chance that you might continue this story?

Beautiful writing! I'm looking forward to the rest. This is a very good story!

Wow another lovely chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

I have a feeling Schuldig isn't going to have nearly as easy a time tellling Crawford he's going away for the weekend, especially after ignoring his demands to return for the whole night. I look forward to each new chapter of this story!

It's rare to find a truly good WK writer, which is why I'm SOOO happy to have stumbled across this fic. I read all six chapters in under two hours and can't wait for the rest. Got started on 'It's All Relative' from there, and I can officially say that you've got yourself a new diehard fangirl ^_~ Your pairings are unconventional, but you make it work, and that takes some doing. I'll definitely be looking out for your stuff in future. Merry Christmas and thanks for two fantastic stories!

Another great story. Another great chapter. Very sweet, and I love to see these two characters given the grace of real affection. I look forward to reading more.

I apologize for beginning to fear you might not return to this wonderful story. What a return -- with a sweet, juicy lemon. Thank you!

Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see more!

Amazing story. I love everything about it. Please update soon

Great beginning! Eloquently written, actually takes canon plot into consideration. =P The only thing I'd have to complain about is your portrayal of Crawford... BradxSchu is actually my fave pairing, although two redheads is nice as well. Don't mind me, it's just a personal preference. ^^ Reading on~~~