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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story.
You did a good job setting up the plausibility and having Asuka catch Rei at the point of suicide was a great way to begin the bonding. You also did a great job with the romance, though the sex was a little sedate by my standards. But it took me several stories to get the courage to go any farther than you did here.
Well done.
DC (AKA 94saturn, I think that I recognize your pen name.)
You did a good job setting up the plausibility and having Asuka catch Rei at the point of suicide was a great way to begin the bonding. You also did a great job with the romance, though the sex was a little sedate by my standards. But it took me several stories to get the courage to go any farther than you did here.
Well done.
DC (AKA 94saturn, I think that I recognize your pen name.)