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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
of all things. you write sakaki too huh? i just see you EVERYWHERE.
anyway, good sex scene. not too abundant in detail, a sentence gives us all we need to know. unlike yours truly, which tries to force every possibly nuance of what's going on to the poor reader T_T
"Yeah, sure," said Kagura, as if she really could've said something else.
i've got this down in my mental notebook. convey what character says and thinks in single sentence.
anyway, good sex scene. not too abundant in detail, a sentence gives us all we need to know. unlike yours truly, which tries to force every possibly nuance of what's going on to the poor reader T_T
"Yeah, sure," said Kagura, as if she really could've said something else.
i've got this down in my mental notebook. convey what character says and thinks in single sentence.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written and a job well done. I'm interested wether you will continue this? I am a fan of Sakaki/Kagura stories and would love to read mroe about them. Are you going to continue this? Im curious as how they hooked up. Its rather random but I like it.
Peace out
Peace out
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm...not bad. A little out of character, sure, but not nearly as out of character as any fic pairing Sakaki with someone other than Kagura anyway. Nice job.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was great hope for more like this soon
With Love;Imasuky Lomae
With Love;Imasuky Lomae