rate_review Reviews

One of my favorites here in the LH section. I enjoyed the dream sequence in chapter 2 very much, although the short fantasy scenes in the first chapter were great as well. It would be awesome if these two chapters were to become the jump-pad from which to create a more realized sexual relationship between Keitaro and Shinobu. I definitely enjoy seeing her in stories.

I did wish that the sex scene in chapter two were a little more densely written. A lot happened, but you swept over them a bit quickly, and I would've liked some more descriptions to help put the reader in the scene.

not bad. not bad at all.

hm I like where this is going ^^ You are much better than you think . I strongly believe that you have quite a future here in AFF and I'll anxiously wait for your next chapter . Keep this up , you just got a new fan ;)

Nice story, very well done and hot.. mmmm. I look forward to further chapters! ^_^

Oh wow that was hot I have always loved Shinobu but I love motoko even more but this story is great hope for an update really soon

With love;Imasuky Lomae

Thanks for this! There are too few Keitaro/Shinobu in here.

CONTINUE THIS FANFIC!!!!!! I beg you! have it end up with Shinobu and keitaro actually doing it!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!

love it, hope you update soon

Great fic. It's always good to see a new author.

excellent. update soon!