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hey hey :) loved this new chapter, looking forward to more!

AND....i'm the first commenter! yay! ive never been able to do that before :)

First, thank you very much for the warning. It probably would have upset me if I hadn’t been warned to expect it. (Although I didn’t expect it to be Mugen.) Second, I enjoy reading you story. It has substance and a good strong plot line that I am eager to see where it goes. Third, you write very well, you story flows, it draws a reader in and is intense with out being painfully so. My only request would be update a little quicker if you can do so without sacrificing the quality of your writing. What I mean is don’t force a chapter just to put something up.

AWESOME! THIS STORY IS SO GREAT...I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHY MUGEN'S ALL MESSED UP! BE NICE TO HIM, THOUGH, CUZ HE'S MY FAVORITE! UPDATE PLEASE!!!

Cool fic! It's got my attention already, and I can't wait for more!!

WOW, what a great story!! The storyline's intriguing, the plot's flowing smoothly, the characters are IC .. what more could ya want?? :)

Yatta! New chapter! Well done! Happy Birthday!

hey there. this piece is very well written so far :) you're really good at articulating without sounding pretentious. i'm definitely intrigued and eagerly look forward to your next installment :)

Rinji

If you don't continue this, I will hunt you down, tie you to a chair and make you listen to bad disco music until you scream. NOW, stop doubting and write! I will supply coffe and chocolate if needed.

If you don't continue this, I will hunt you down, tie you to a chair and make you listen to bad disco music until you scream. NOW, stop doubting and write! I will supply coffee and chocolate if needed.