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by FreeFall

person GrassProphet
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im almost afraid to review this. Its a solid story with sexuality, a bit of adventure, and a very cool main character. My fear comes from the fact that almost everyone that starts a solid story on aff stops writing. bsmart, Caesar_Pallace7, ect. had solid interesting stories and cut off writing them. Its extremely frustrating getting into a story just to have the author decide he/she doesnt care enough to finish it. Most people just dont get around to checking aff all that often or else they dont like to review but please dont let the lack of reviews discourage you from continuing this story. Please continue to write and know that you do have people that enjoy your story. The vast majority of them just arent very vocal about it.

Grass Prophet

~so it has been prophesized by the grass and so it shall be~
person Mc.Orion
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A nice Story.
You have a good story and its good to read.
Keep it up !

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