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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful. A story of love told through delusion, absolutely perfect.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh - what a lovely story. My previous experiences with WK have been Pam Nunn's delightful fiction. There, Schwartz is always purely evil. And I do love Pam's WK best - but this has been a delightful diversion.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohmygod. .... you're amazing!!! XD
i LOVE your writing style. the use of parallell prose in the second chapter was awesome, tho it did get a little tiring after continuing for so long.
the tiny hints of dialogue in chapter 1 made me soooo happy. Farfie's so psycho -& u nailed it perfectly.^_^
he's my FAVORITE character & it's very seldom that he's well written or even understood. u did a phenomenal job -i even took some quotes from farf's god rants in chapter 1. i especially liked the second paragraph!
i LOVE your writing style. the use of parallell prose in the second chapter was awesome, tho it did get a little tiring after continuing for so long.
the tiny hints of dialogue in chapter 1 made me soooo happy. Farfie's so psycho -& u nailed it perfectly.^_^
he's my FAVORITE character & it's very seldom that he's well written or even understood. u did a phenomenal job -i even took some quotes from farf's god rants in chapter 1. i especially liked the second paragraph!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I never thought I would enjoy a fic in whcih Farfarello actually uses the "It hurts God" line. Usually, it puts me off really badly, but this was really nicely done. It was done with enough insight into his character to make it good. Very nice!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Each time there is a new story from you or a new or revised chapter, it is cause for celebration. I had fond memories of this story, and not infrequently reread it. The second chapter, however, has been revised, yes? Most delightfully -- thank you so very, very much!