rate_review Reviews

I loved it. I understand what you mean about the lemon scenes being hard, but you pulled it off so well. There aren't many poeple who can actually write, but I have to say you are one of them.

Very nice finale, very nice. Wraps everything up quite well, though they never did seem to realize what Dream did, not that it really matters in the end. Laters.

Lovely

Please, sir, I want some...more?? And besides, you haven't revealed which naughty card was helping their "dreams". Though I think I have an idea, or two. Laters.

Of course you should write another chapter! This is the greatest fic I've read in a long time!

Pretty please? :D

And which naughty little card has been facilitating this, I wonder? I have an idea, but I'll wait for the finale!
Laters.

Extremely lovely and touching, perfectly titled, and I look forward to Syaoran's part of the story. Saying I enjoy a het story on AFF is very, *very* rare - thank you for making it something beautiful!

That was and amazing start, very sensual and real.
I'm a very open minded person and enjoy reading het and yaoi stories as long as they're well written and emotionally touching and your story is definitely both.
It's refreshing to read something more mature, especially when it involves adolescence, aweking desires, discovery ^^.
I'm very anxious to read more, now witnessing Syoran's input on the matter. You described him perfectly, sweet, strong, respectful...awww...maybe I'm reading too much into this, but I'm a faithful fan of this lovely couple and it's VERY hard to find something good about them so I have to say it when I do find!
Thank you for writing,
Hugs
Snowflake