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You shouldn't criticise main characters so that your own seem better by comparison. I understand that most authors start out with a Sue story, it's only natural. I think you should put more thought into your setting and stop pigeon-holing all foreign males as rapists.

Finally a new OCXAlucard! And so far it’s good, short but good! Normally I would have ideas for you but I’ve run dry...*sighs* must be the headache. If you want to talk with me e-mail or MGS me with yahoo SN is steelcry_storm_of_souls long I know but I like it ~_~. OH here’s one for you: She and Alucard grow fond of one another but she knows that she must return to the states. So she leaves reluctantly though and Alucard for some reason lets her go. Um that’s it I’m sorry I don't have anything else for you, maybe I’ll have more for next review. More ideas are coming to me as I type but this reveiw is already long so e-mail jdcrowe15@comcast.net or e-mail/mgs me at yahoo.

I likey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hey good story so far
keep up the good work
can't wait for more