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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I really like the ending with the gunshot.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay this is good but i really thought abel was the one who would do it with esther also update soon and if this is gonna be an abelXesther fic try to make it sound like it cause estherxabel are my favorite couple of the show and also please update soon.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* poor gal...that vampire got pwned doh but he acted like a bigger wuss thn i thot. Esthers mind is a mess for sure and Abel gonna help her out and such. Now mostlikely shell be scared of other men and look to Abel only as protection and alot more details...angsty awesomness!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a fine job telling your story, no worries :) Punctuation and spelling are a bit off, but otherwise the story is coming along. There's no need to be shy, we all have to start somewhere, don't we? Keep up the good work and see you next chapter.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it illegal somewhere to post twice? Hope not...
I'm still likin' it! It was much easier to follow this time, and I'm really liking where you're going with the story. Keep up the good work!
I'm still likin' it! It was much easier to follow this time, and I'm really liking where you're going with the story. Keep up the good work!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god dude...thats like hella angsty which i like but i had nvr thot ever in a fic that Esther would get raped and stuff. Theres gonan be alot of changes and alot of shit going on I know dat for sure. She probably gonna be a vampire or something right? Abel is so gonna freak...
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it. The plot was excellent, the characterization was very accurate, and the suspense is killing me! (lol)
The only thing it lacked in was punctuation, which made it slightly harder to read. But overall, it was a great story! Please continue!
The only thing it lacked in was punctuation, which made it slightly harder to read. But overall, it was a great story! Please continue!