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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really want to read more. i hate cliff hangers. please update soon.
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting please update soon.
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hhm... I'd say this is pretty well done. Not super vulgar like some things I've seen. Very well done. I hope to see more different kinds of poke's from you, perhaps some dark types like Absol and Murkrow? Anyway, very good.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow its been a while.. still interesting tho. look forward to more. when you think about it this story is still pretty short XD look forward to more taming and perhaps a good battle between trainers.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since I've gotten involved in anything PokéGirls-related, and for good reason... I admit my idea of restoring the old U.S.A. was a bad one.
However, I couldn't help but notice that the principal's last name was Cramer. This instantly gave me an idea to help revitalize the economy of the world.
However, for this to work, you need to know who Jim Cramer is.
However, I couldn't help but notice that the principal's last name was Cramer. This instantly gave me an idea to help revitalize the economy of the world.
However, for this to work, you need to know who Jim Cramer is.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is very well written and I am completely unfamiliar with the pokegirl idea. It's a shame that more people haven't reviewed it seeing as how it has 3 chapters and I have checked each day for a fourth.
I like the main character he is very dark and calculating sorta sees through the crap we put around ourself and hide behind. Very catcher in the rye.
Great so far cant wait for more!
I like the main character he is very dark and calculating sorta sees through the crap we put around ourself and hide behind. Very catcher in the rye.
Great so far cant wait for more!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems like a good story so far. I hope that you continue it :)
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice rpg story type you have good storyline and all espically with this all being porn and all.
no complaints keep up the good work.
no complaints keep up the good work.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see you are getting "inspiration" for your names from the esteemed Miyazaki....