rate_review Reviews

That was beautiful! Wow, I loved it!

Beautifully written. It really captures the slightly more serious side of the series and explores the characters' emotions and personality. The flow of the whole story is smooth and I like the way how you alternated scenes and tied the two scenes together. Great job.

You know, this is really, very well done. You have some very nice word choices in there. The musical vocabulary is not overdone, but adds to the piece. This place is filled with a lot of rubbish; it's satifying to find a piece like this. No OOC, nothing unbelievable, nothing gratuitous... Just short and to the point...and interesting! Very nicely done - you've even characterized Sara well. I apologize for sounding surprised, but this really is a gem amoungst the ore.

You really are quite talented - I'm not much for Jin/Mugen, yet I always am intrigued to read your work since it flows so beautifully. :) It saddens me that you don't write het, but from you...well...I suppose I'll just take whatever I can get. ^^ lol Keep writing other SC fiction, please! ;0) Don't let us lazy readers/reviewers discourage you!