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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah how the best laid plans of mice and vampires go awry. Very interesting, the the master has become a slave to his own desires. Happens that way. Excellent work as always.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, need some water. Dehydrated from drooling. Excellent chapter. This should cause some very interesting mental anguish when Abel does show up to rescue her.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*claps* i like this. nightmares of killing abel and cain holding her?? wow never thought that would happen. so surprising. i love that about your writing. it always surprises me. cant wait to see what happens next. looking forward to it
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooty-hoo! *fans self* That was ssSMOKin'! Very well written, my dear. The ultimate smut-fest! When Isaac entered the room as Hugue, I was like "this is gonna be GOOD!" Hee. Cain-kun is falling looooooove with our heroine and it's absolutely fanTASTic! I'm so excited right now I'm chucking out my own verbal vomit. And I have an early class tomorrow! Ai, I'm never gonna get to sleep...update really soon, k? Onegai gozaimasu!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww EMO SEX! XD *coughs and blushes* eh eh yeah sorry about that lol
wow I had to turn on the fan for that chapter! I dont see any flaws with it so no worrys! ^o^
I love how you mentioned " but somehow they’d blurred the line and she wasn’t sure anymore if it could be considered rape" I have heard of situations just like that!
aww poor emo Abel! *kicks Esther with blue* :D better abel? j/k!
wow I had to turn on the fan for that chapter! I dont see any flaws with it so no worrys! ^o^
I love how you mentioned " but somehow they’d blurred the line and she wasn’t sure anymore if it could be considered rape" I have heard of situations just like that!
aww poor emo Abel! *kicks Esther with blue* :D better abel? j/k!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've gotta slow down... people have to work! Excellent chapters yet again... and i'm glad you're giving Hugue attention... but you're a horrible influence. I spent two whole days writing. Well done to you indeed. Oh... and glad to hear you caught Hellsing... glorious isn't it? anyway keep up the good writing!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story, i've been checking back on occasion and figured i'd like to review now. i'm not usually one to review stories i'd rather just sit and enjoy but i really really like this. i'm more of a yaoi person but this is really well written and even though its not yaoi i find it to be a highly enjoyable read. i've only recently gotten into TB and i love it, i just don't find alot of fics out there, especially good ones. how could you not have tons of fanfics with sooooo many hot characters?? like hot crusniks lol. i'm so glad i stumbled upon your fic and hope to read more of it. i'm so interested to find out what happens, you have a wonderful style of writing that keeps me hooked on it. thank you!! can't wait to read more!! ^_^
~DM
~DM
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you write good torture fiction!!! Must you make Abel suffer so? Meow, I think its pretty kinky all the way! Here, have some EGO PILLZ. It will heal you!
SIDE EFFECTS: ADD!!! lol.
mUAHAHAHAHA.
Here, a smut puppy! *gives a puppy*
SIDE EFFECTS: ADD!!! lol.
mUAHAHAHAHA.
Here, a smut puppy! *gives a puppy*
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luved this chapter. such a hot lemon. beautiful. i look forward to the next chapter and hope that abel appears soon
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I only discovered this story recently. I admire your writing talent. I love the Alex/Cain/Isaak interactions - your Isaak is so perfectly depraved, and the way you write his submissiveness to Cain adds another very hot dimension to those two. The psychological angles are disturbing yet fascinating. I'm looking forward to finding out what the treatment does to Alex's mind. (Somehow, I want to see her punish Isaak without mercy, as she threatened, lol.)