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Shit, I wet myself... YOU ARE TRULY THE GODDESS OF SMUT... I WORSHIP YOU!! i heart u!!! Meow, write some more??

*hands out a bag of SMUT KIBBLES*

My idol forever you are! Kepp up with the good work!

I think it's fantabulous how they use Latin and German in this anime/manga. It's quite spiffy, although their German sucks. ^__^ I wasn't sure if Alex's prayer was an actual prayer or if it was Bach's "Ave Maria", but you answered that question. I felt so bad for Alex you have no idea. What's even more sad is that they heal her right when they've finished, so she'll last for weeks to come. If they're not careful, they drive her insane, which wouldn't do Cain a whole lot of good. Yet it's interesting how her salvation just may be those prayers she keeps repeating. Interesting plot development...

I don't know if I ever daid it but this is totally my favorite fan fic like ever!!! Ha Esther got told sort of. Anyways once again great work.

Retro Lamb

lol esther got put on hush mouth again & cain is sooo out of it oh yea & i think it would be so kewl if ya did an hellsing fic too you'll forevr have my reviews since your story is the only 1 I review on I never really cared for it much but your story is worth it.

Yet another lovely chapter. The hurt/comfort when played properly can cause psychological deviations for literally years until a person retrains themselves. Sometimes they are never quite the same again. It's seen quite a lot when a Master or Mistress is breaking in a new submissive, particularly those who are willful. Again, very good work.

wow. just. WOW!

the last chapters were really emotional! I hope abel finds her soon though! and while hes at it kicks Esther or..er.. something along those lines ^^;;

Another excellent set of chapters. Even when he's at his worst, Cain can make it all seem right, can't he? I feel so bad for Alex, being 'charmed' by Cain and Isaak. I hope that she uses this to her advantage somehow and makes those two pay dearly for being such cretins. btw, thanks for the prayer's translation and you're right it does look and sound better in the latin.
Until next time.

that was too cool. FINALLY!!! Esther was basically told to shut her mouth! that was too funny. but still the torture you gave alex made me feel it (lol). i like that in a story. cant wait until the next chapter

Oh, luv, try not to be down. I shall keep my shiny reviews coming and hope that I can accidently cheer you up, seeing how most things I do are by accident. O__o
I like where this story is going, because it sets up this beautiful foreshadowing of a most excellent search and rescue by the AX. I would absolutely love to read about a final battle between Cain and Abel, cause it's just begging to happen! Like a Hugue/Alex smexy-fest. Cha! I shall await the goody with my box of tissue to catch the undoubtable nosebleed. Cause Hugue's just that hot. -.-

Interesting Chapter. I don't know much about Cain but it will be interesting how you play his character out. Kudos to you your a great writer and don't be so down on yourself!
Retro Lamb