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by BishiMistress

person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* I know what you mean about there being little interest in Trinity Blood. It's such a pity that something so dark yet strangely beautiful could be passed over. Plus there are vampires. How can you go wrong with vampires? Anyway, I like how there is so much promise in just the first chappie. Alex presents herself as tough, but in reality she has this inferiority complex that she's had since a little girl. Intricate characters and storylines are great. I'm hoping your imagination takes the plot and goes wild with it. ^__^
person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Steeeeeamy. Abel is just a big hung of burnin' Crusnik, eh? And I dunno if it was from an uploading error or what, but the first chappie had lines of dialogue running to together and was giving me a headache. Fortunately, number two was filled with wonderful spaces between paragraphs. Yay for the return key!
person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the Sword Dancer!
person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dramatic music* duh duh duuuuuhn! I hope you don't mind my nonsensical reviews for every chappie. I figure, since I'm gonna read til the end, I might as well take two minutes to say something random. Yeah...
person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your Shakespearean referrence is outdated, luv. Haven't you heard? Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are dead! *chortles* Ah, I couldn't resist. Gomen.
person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Yeah, I wouldn’t mind receiving him either."
Hee.
Hey know what? Sometimes, stories can't survive without nothing-happened chapters. So don't worry and just plan on giving us a doozy next time!
person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say if you're limes are this good, you must have some powerful lemons. *squeals*
person Caranril
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o...m...g...Bloody cliffhanger! *breaks out grenade launcher* Die!
No, no, it was a great ending. It keeps readers on their toes.
And I must have learned something in Bio 101, cause I totally understood that blurb. Yup yup yup.
person Jesie
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww that was so romantic! * gets dreamy eyed*

lol I wish I was 90% pretty! lol tres can be a sweetheart!

Oh and as for the song was it evanessance (hope I spelt that right!)
person Jesie
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It wasnt as bad as you said! :P I liked it!

it really defined that Esther will be a jelouse brat!

aww though with the sickness! get lots of rest!

Ooo ninja song in next chapter hmm? cant wait to see if you decide to add it!

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