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by BishiMistress

person sheyenne
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!! But whats going to happen with them now......hm.....i wonder if they will stay together or will she go back to Cain... ah soo many question wandering inside my head and so little time to get them down. oh well. i suppose i have to wait
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was great. it was so cool with two crusniks just being together in those forms even though Alex hasn't been one for long. i would imagine it would be exciting for Alex to figure out flying, man if i could i would want to try it out right away! lol. i enjoyed it. though the end of the chapter was sad, poor Abel having Cain being such an ass. but it makes for a great story plot and Cain deserves some attention too. can't wait for the next chapter.

ps-yur stories are not crappy!!
person vbruce
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done as always. I really enjoy Alex wanting to learn how to fly so quickly. Hell, I would.
person sheyenne
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG............dude how totally awesome. i must say that you are one of the best writers ive ever seen on here. im totally trying to be like you....nah i cant do that cause no one can copy you. loved it
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alex as cruisnik 05 this is going to be very interesting! Did I say 2 babies huh I didn't even realize that??? Once again everything looks great. And thanks for the 12 step XD

Retro Lamb
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!! i love love love this chapter!!!! it was my all time favorite chapter (besides the sex scenes lol). reason being is because it was so damn cool!! i love the creativity you came up with on Alex's change and its awesome that even though she's a crusnik she looks different from Cain and Abel. i could picture it all happening, i was glued to the screen the whole time lol i think my phone rang but i didn't notice. i'm so intersted in finding out how she handles things now, especially when she learns how to fly. Abel should teach her.

i also can't wait to find out what you made the babies look like. hey, does Isaack have a hand in the pregnancy? is that how he could sense the change in her too and you didn't really mention other methuselah noticing it? or am i way off and my brain is just running away with ideas? oh i can't wait to find out!!!!! i'm pracitcally foaming at the mouth!
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Capitolo Eccellente!!!
Thank you for the very good chappy!!!!! Oh poor Abel * shakes head * Envy is such a sin. However it is still so cute to see Hugue all loving towards Alex even though he can’t have her *sniffs* But I suppose Abel has a right to be jealous since she and him are in love. *Ponders for a moment * Oh well I am not one to talk, since lust is also a sin and I do a lot of that, lol but don’t mind me ranting about that! What a fabulous story, inspiring to all. Alex turning cruisnik, I like, I like. Can’t wait for Abel and Alex too…well how to put this? “Catch up”…..ok pretty much if you want to be straightforward have sex!! Lol Yay smut! I wonder how she will deal with the new powers and all. Yet what will the others think?!?! Bum bum bum! Of course I don’t really care what Esther would think, but that would just be me being an “Esther Hater.” Once again thank you so much for the chapter, it was truly wonderful and can’t wait for the next.
Ciao!
Minastella
person Caranril
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o That's so freakin' cool. Almost wish I was a Crusnik (or Kresnik). Almost. I suppose the loneliness would be difficult, but as you outlive those who you love anyway, you adjust quickly. At least Abel and Alex have each other. And Hugue. Aw, poor wittle Hugue-ness. *huggles Hugue plushy* Why can't everyone be happy? Oh, that's right: cause it's a good story!
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!! I totally freaken knocked my head on my keyboard when I first read this!!! (owie)so how is Alex knoked up with both as Cain relys his and Ables son if you could please shed some light on it and is she going to be methusula or a full fleged crusnik........( really hopes for crusnik). You are fabulous I am totally hooked on this story even more now and I didn't think that was possible. Shame on you for making me an addict XD!!!

Peace out,
Retro Lamb
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Così bello
I loved this last chapter! A shame Cain had to let her go for Isaac's love but non-the-less she was reunited with her true love*faints* Abel! It takes a lot to make this girl happy, yet you do it with such ease. Absolutely love the Cain romance....Mmmm what are you planning? I wonder lol. Well anyways it was good, as I would expect since it is you. You are a writing God! *Bows down* If only you could shine you glorious talent on my weak writings, lol. Cannot wait for the sequel! Yay love, smut and drama, the things that make the world go round!
Until then,
~Minastella~
P.S. yes don’t we all love new reviewers! Even though I am not a “new reader” I just finally got rid of my sloth demon and decided to write lol. But non-the-less ya reviews! Ciao

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