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by BishiMistress

person vbruce
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Wonder who the baby actually belongs to. They'll never know since Abel and Cain are identical and would logically have the same DNA sequences. Sorry, minored in Forensics. Love the interplay between Cain and Isaak. Excellent job as always.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!! as soon as i started reading this chapter and you started hinting at changes and the way you worded things i figured out how half of that chapter would end! and the more i read it the more sure i was!! wow!!! she's pregnant! with Cain's baby! lol thats awesome!! though i can't wait to find out what Abel thinks about it. though...its kinda like his kid too since Cain and Abel are like the same? lol either way its still awesome and was not expecting that to happen until i got ot this chapter!! i hope Alex makes it thru the transformation cuz that would be really cool!! and baby crusniks!!! what's cuter than that?! lol at least to me. i'm so psyched to find out what happens!! its like puppies that drink vampire blood!!! or maybe not but oh my god baby crusniks would be adorable!!!

lol ewwww chapter upload diarrhea and constipation!!! yet it made me crack up hysterically to read the way you word that!! i'm sooooo soooo happy to find out there's more to come!!! hooray!!!!!
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...are crusniks ACTUALLY able to do this...?

(gee, I sound like a little kid...)

I am simply enchanted by how you write this. Aw, poor Cain...that tore my heart in 2! Finally able to be loved (I know,I know...that line's OLD!!!), and then to have Alex ripped away. God...YOU MADE ME BREAK DOWN AND CRY!! I love though. I hate Esther...Ion likes her...egh. Ion should have killed her!!

(why am I ranting about this? ...the world may never know!)

Once my eyes landed on that last sentece Cain said...his child and Abel's? She's pregnant?!?! Holy crud, YOU SHOULD BE PAID TO WRITE THINGS LIKE THIS!! An unsuspecting twist!! *clap, clap, clap!*

I lurv you!! Take this adorable smut puppy and a big pat on the back!

WRITE MORE!!!


Please?? M-chan.

HUGHE-STYLE, BITCHES!!!!
person Caranril
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I'm listening to "Broken Wings" piano version while I read this, and I must say it was a fitting theme for this chappie. Someone's broken, but the question is, who exactly?! Cain? Alex? Isaac? Perhaps even Abel now that his beloved's a Methusela? Only the next chappie will reveal the exciting conclusion! *end cheesy Pokemon narrative voice here*
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* i haven't checked in a few days and i have no new chappies to read....*sniffle, cry, sob* i was so looking forward to it. come on people lets get reviewing so that addicted people like me can have their fix of more TB goodness!! i finally got all the drool out of my room from the Isaack and Dietrich chapter so now its ready to be flooded again!
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story so much! I have been waiting every week to read the next chapters lol I am addicted to your story, its nice to have someone write about Trinity Blood, especially when it has to do with Abel and Cain *drools*! You are so talented at writting, it is a shame people do not reveiw. *Naughty People* Anyways keep up the good work and I cannot wait to read the next chapter. *is dieing for Alex to be reunited with Abel*
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Forgive for the lateness. Education can be SUCH a pest. Especially Professeors and students. I love the way you have been putting poor Alex through many...SCORCHING situations. You are quite the kinky author. Bravo! Encore, encore!!

Abel was close, wasn't he? Cathy-chan kinda took the fun outta it. (Gosh, M, don't be stupid! PRAISE the authoress!! Don't ruin her moment!!) Gee, I loved it when Abel stabbed Cain. Yell, yell, luagh, stab. Its all evil and heroism until SOMEONE gets stabbed. IssacxDietrich rulz!! Sex is your forte, M'dear. Somehow it always makes me smile and horny to read these. Its hard to not get all flustered...



Please write more!! Love all the pairings you wrote and posted!! Boy toys and Hugue-style Lives on!!

person Kaie
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok... I'll review... I know i review a lot, but i figure it's better than nothing! I have fully enjoyed this story and i desperately want to see Abel and Alex together again! Cain is gorgeous... but come on... Abel... well that's all that really needs to be said! Keep up the good work!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eveything looks good so far.Hope you get all the reviews you desire. I am been lazy lately and my computers a bitch so I'll stay tuned the best I can.


Retro Lamb
person Caranril
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I guess in order to get my Blood fix, I'm gonna hafta read the volume 3 and 4 scanlations I just downloaded. I shall be awaiting your update, MissMurder-chan! Gambatte ne!

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