rate_review Reviews

One thing I totally don't get is why Alex cries so much. Hardly being a crier myself nor been in a situation like Alex, I don't really have a right to talk. But one would think that after the torture and betrayal that she'd have been a little more hardened. I dunno. Perhaps she's already on that path and I don't see it. Do you hate me now for being critical? Gr....argh...

*drool* that was great. i love lemony goodness even if its non yaoi. especially if it involves hot characters...hooray! lol i would so be spying on Cain if i were Isaack. will you be bringing Dietrich into the story? the puppet master may make a fun spin on things. just an idea i thought i'd throw out. though i am enjoying the story as its going so far. joy! ^_^

oh how i wish i were alex right now. isaac feels a little left out, ne? poor guy. for some odd reason though, i like the word punishment coming from cain's mouth.......it sounds so......hot (yeah thats the word). this is such a good story and i am looking forward to the next chapter a lot. and yes school is just another word for prison and it sucks ass very much but we need it. i hope

*Astha

Fabulous. I can almost see the cognitive workings and the Stockholm syndrome kicking in with Alex. Excellent psych work.

hot. pure and sexy. god, you must recieve the SMUT award!! I really like the way Isaac actualy confessed what he did, and he really never does that. I remember watching an episode where one of Dietrich's (god the guy's hot too!!) puppets tries to kill Esther--this is me...

M: YA, KILL HER!!!!! DAMNIT, SLICE HER HAEAD OF! SHE CAN'T HAVE ABEL OR ION!!! I CAN ONLY HAVE THEM!!! KILL THE BITCH!!!

Yeah, but then Seth kinda ruined it. The count (not Ion) should have killed esther.

ITS NOT FAIR!! Abel almost got there, huh? Gee, eeeevil hot vampires. Must go romping with them!

Dontcha just hate nightmares like that. Excellent writing as always.

aww poor poor howt psyco cain! I wish there was a twin of alex so everyone can be happy! (jokeing!)

lulu cant sue? drat! * calls off lawyers* :p
OOoo CSI? I have heard much about it but I have never really had the chance to steal the T.v when its on! ah well I should just go to utube or something or another ^^;;

Mmmm Bishies! XD Japan should really make a candy company called that! id order! <3

More wonderful work, I love how you play out the dream sequences. and YES I finally figured out what the rain thing means. Took me long enough lol.

Peace out, Retro Lamb

you sure know how to get to me lol. i really liked this chapter. i thought it was real until it got to the end and abel was just dreaming. but alex jumping off a roof? abel better do something about that..................hm......cant wait to see what happens next. looking forward to it.

*Astharoshe_lunastars alter ego

P.S. you are like the best (hey i made a ryhme but it wasnt intended lol)

Cain falling in love is an interesting development. It was intriguing how in Abel's dream, Cain's love was so pure and he was so beatific and selfless. Since people in dreams are meant to be aspects of ourselves, I wonder if what Abel dreamed was really a reflection of his own love? Anyway, I'm looking forward to finding out what Cain's version of love will be like in reality. Also can't wait to see what happens with Cain/Isaak/Alex.