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You have this way about your writing that transports me into the story and I love it. I hope you keep writing and I know what it's like to have a schedule where there's not enough hours in the day. Take your time. When your ready to write and post another chapter. I for one will be ready to read it.

Me? New reader? *imitates Alucard's howling insane laughter*
Hmm, my bad. I have read homecoming, it just didn't click for me that these two plots were connected.

That was great and sooo adorable yet delightfully seductive and dark I enjoyed this chapter immensely can't wait till you update. I have a request that you may or may not oblige it could you please make seras stronger. I'm getting the sense that she is weak which makes me mad so please make her stronger or explain why your not yet Thank you!
Keep up the great work

Arry

I've been reading all your stories and can say that you are one of the best writers I've ever came upon. I've been very excited since you posted the fourth instalment of your story regarding AlucardxSeras. I am a big fan of your work. I hope you update soon. Please forgive any mistake in this review, after all am an english learner. Gracias.

Keep going.

I just now offically finished all of your stories before this one in the seriuos kept me up all night till 4 am to be exact just couldn't stop I love all your lemon and gore scenes makes me so hott lol. Well can't wait till you update I'm be waiting your an awsome writer.

Arry

I don't understand why I'm only the FIRST reviewer of this piece. It's a great A/S with emphasis on plot rather than sex. Although there are a few, there are VERY few, dismissable typos, and your writing flows like a freshwater river.. Meaning its very good.
On the subject of keeping A and S in character, (I won't mention Integra or Walter because there's nothing to mention, you write them flawlessly) But as for the two vampires, I have nothing major to beef about, but they seem a bit.. Like secondary characters in this plot. It felt as if the main focus was Integra and her impending wedding.
You chose to write A and S as already being in a relationship of intimacy, nothing wrong with that, but it removes room for development, doesn't it? Although its your fic and you probably knew it was necessary to the plot for it to be like that, so it's cool. I liked how you wrote Serras as already having learned a few dark gifts, very cool. And for once, a 'Alucard teaches Serras' scene that I couldn't turn my nose up at.
As for the NC-17 content, five stars, I could totally see them doing that. Hope there's more where that came from. Good stuff kids go for, lol

Keep em coming!! You keep writing and I'll keep reviewing, k?

Chiao,
TEOATG&B

Thanks for the review. I put this up on Chapter 1. I forget there are new readers to this site all the time and may have not read the other three stories that came before this one. If you haven't had a chance yet, please read the first three stories Partners, Homecoming and Twisted Shadows. This basically tells how Alucard and Seras met and began their relationship and how it evolves. It's an Alternate Universe Hellsing Series so Alucard and Seras met differently than they did in the anime and manga. Hope that gives you more of an idea of how they got involved with each other. I'll go through the first two chapters of this story to find the typos. I get so busy sometimes I forget to do a spell check. Thanks for the comments. I hope to have more done soon.
Silverrose