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July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi i loved your story i really think you should continue writing keep up the good work
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait that was great. Hope to read it soon
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it...please continue
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting little story, if I do say so myself. Very cute. tee hee!! A little surprising for it to be your first fan-fic 'cause of how well-constructed it was compared to some other stories I have read. *cough* The only things that bugged me was the numerous grammatical and punctuation errors; some of them being so bad that I had to stop and re-read the sentence to make sure I got the right idea. But don't let that deter you. A valiant effort, and I do look forward to your update, if/whenever you do. *nodnod*
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BE CAREFUL.
I had a fic which mentioned that Chii could have children, and the reviewers were merciless to me. As for the rest of it, please use a spell and grammar checker. There are sites that will do this for you if you google them. Overall, a 5 out of 10.
I had a fic which mentioned that Chii could have children, and the reviewers were merciless to me. As for the rest of it, please use a spell and grammar checker. There are sites that will do this for you if you google them. Overall, a 5 out of 10.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good theres really small grammar problems but over all I give it a 6 out of 5. Keep going.^^