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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The pros - I love your love scenes. The descriptions are evocative. Not completely reality based, but not out there in fantasyland either. Just the right mix.
The cons - If I'd never read the Tamaki version, I'd love this version without question, but since the Tamaki version does exist and in that version both Tamaki and Haruhi are pitched perfectly in character, this version isn't quite as good as Mori and Haruhi just don't quite seem in character.
Overall, though, a welcome surprise.
The cons - If I'd never read the Tamaki version, I'd love this version without question, but since the Tamaki version does exist and in that version both Tamaki and Haruhi are pitched perfectly in character, this version isn't quite as good as Mori and Haruhi just don't quite seem in character.
Overall, though, a welcome surprise.
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! That was so awesome. Hot and well written! Mori was just great. I wish there was more, but it was a good place to end it.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I reallly liked this version for someone reason I really like Mori go figure maybe it's that whole still waters run thing that I've heard. Great one shot I really enjoyed it.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This was really good, as good as the Tamaki one. Your such a good writer!
I would like to see more 'Bee to the Blossom' stories, say, the rest of the Club?
Like, Harhi being surprised by one of them or something...entirley up to you.
If you wrote a 'BttB' for each character, I would be one happy little fangirl, running around yelling "MOE!!!!"...in my head, of course.
Don't want to start being too 'Tamaki-esque', hehe.
Anyway, brilliant job.
I would like to see more 'Bee to the Blossom' stories, say, the rest of the Club?
Like, Harhi being surprised by one of them or something...entirley up to you.
If you wrote a 'BttB' for each character, I would be one happy little fangirl, running around yelling "MOE!!!!"...in my head, of course.
Don't want to start being too 'Tamaki-esque', hehe.
Anyway, brilliant job.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... Well done! I'd love to see more, please!
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah, i loved it so much >___<
please do a second chappie. Onegaiiiiiiiiiiiii~
please do a second chappie. Onegaiiiiiiiiiiiii~
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just thinking the other day that the world needed more HaruxMori. Thanks! I definitely liked it.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. i love mori. enough said.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think u should continue with this one caz id like to see more of these ywo together =)
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your Ouran fanfics!!! Keep it up!!!