rate_review Reviews

For some reason, I think you are far too young to be on this site. Could it be that your 'story' showed that you have neither understanding nor ability to make use of abstract thought? Could it be that you remove all doubt as to the elementary workings of your mind with the partial paragraph you posted and slapped the lable 'story' on?

I agree with your previous reviewer; I do not believe that fiction writing is in your future.

To be very honest It was too short, and too vague. I don't think wrting stories is the thing for you.