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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have very interesting style of writing. I must admit, I also love how you characterized Light and L, as well as how you put so much accent on the little details that pass through Light's thoughts. I sincerely hope you continue this story. ^_^
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the characterization in here, (particularly Ryuuzaki)...one teeny, tiiiiiny technical thing, though...cold is applied to fresh bruises, not heat, (applying heat to the skin makes blood vessels open further and makes the bruising worse)...
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I love you, now.
Make more.
^^;;;
Make more.
^^;;;
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! This is great! I vote you keep going. (Thanks for bringing Raito's hair color to my attention, as well. You'd think I would have realized sooner... -too lazy to make the fix this moment-)