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April 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Absolutely stunning, it looks like Chihiro has made some great friends. I can't wait to see what happens next. Can't wait for you to update this brilliant story. Thank you for sharing it with the world.
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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story, I hope you continue it. I cant wait until the next chapter. :D
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool cant wait to read more. please update soon. that guy chihiros w/ is a fucking jack ass.
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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh please please update this if very good please
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting I can't wait to read more.
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
arrggh! please update!
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start but I've too agree with the first two reviewers on that it gets a little rushed sometimes and that the new characters seems to be a little out of place and I also think that their names seems to be a bit too americanized (for my taste, that is) and that they didn't really fit with the description of the characters features, especially the blonde ones! But I did love Keisha and her boyfriend, they seems deccent enough!
Also thought that you overdid the description of all the characters, which I find to be quite sad, really! Oh, well, could be because I'm not really a big fan of stories whenever the writer describes too much what the characters looks like and especially physical attributes! For example, the size of the boobs, what is a perfect boob size anyways, huh?, kinky hair?, the botty thing, uhuh, tacky, so tacky! You could have at least written; "breast" and "ass or maybe butt" insted or something like that! Even though I might come off harsh about the whole description thingy, I do like how you portray the main characters of course, although I really can't see Haku's body turning into a body builders, oh the horror, btw I hate body builders so that's why, laughs! I'd like you to keep in mind that he was kinda tall and therefore slim/lean in the movie, that's why I really don't think he's body could have become that muscular!
And I really don't mean this as a flame, it's just mearly my thoughts! I do really hope you'll continue cos I want to read more and find out how they're going to met again, so please update soon...
Emma
Also thought that you overdid the description of all the characters, which I find to be quite sad, really! Oh, well, could be because I'm not really a big fan of stories whenever the writer describes too much what the characters looks like and especially physical attributes! For example, the size of the boobs, what is a perfect boob size anyways, huh?, kinky hair?, the botty thing, uhuh, tacky, so tacky! You could have at least written; "breast" and "ass or maybe butt" insted or something like that! Even though I might come off harsh about the whole description thingy, I do like how you portray the main characters of course, although I really can't see Haku's body turning into a body builders, oh the horror, btw I hate body builders so that's why, laughs! I'd like you to keep in mind that he was kinda tall and therefore slim/lean in the movie, that's why I really don't think he's body could have become that muscular!
And I really don't mean this as a flame, it's just mearly my thoughts! I do really hope you'll continue cos I want to read more and find out how they're going to met again, so please update soon...
Emma
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued...
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up! A very good beginning
I wonder what will happen when the two get back together?
I wonder what will happen when the two get back together?