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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I hope you'll come back and continue it sometime.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story here. I don't see any major grammatical or spelling errors.
For something that's PWP, it does have something going for it. I do like the depiction of the elven character pleasuring Louie. It was rather detailed and lusty, how it should be.
Louie will finally get his big break in this fic, I'm sure of it!
I hope you didn't abandon this fanfic since I enjoyed reading it, so here's to hoping to see more!
For something that's PWP, it does have something going for it. I do like the depiction of the elven character pleasuring Louie. It was rather detailed and lusty, how it should be.
Louie will finally get his big break in this fic, I'm sure of it!
I hope you didn't abandon this fanfic since I enjoyed reading it, so here's to hoping to see more!