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for In My Master's Harem

by laustic

person DL69
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^.^ please update soon...

princess_dark_lady_69@yahoo.com
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave me hanging here!!

I'm usually not too keen on AU fics, but this is one of the few I have definitely enjoyed, so PLEASE keep up the good work!
person Janichan
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohs!! Yay! I got to read more! I adore this story so much. Poor hisoka doesn't know what to make of all this. Your imagery is quite good and though you're a bit redundant in a few minor areas (it's hard to notice though) this story has me entranced! Please keep up the good work!

And I may be in the minority with this, but I really don't mind spelling and grammar errors. I can't exactily be called articulate, so I can't be angty at others for being like me, right? go you, laustic!
person DL69
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...poor Hisoka...i really feel sorry for him in this one...cant wait to read the next Chap
person cocoke5
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes the chapter was good and i cn not wait for the next chapter and see if hoska cn make tuski happy up date soon.
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Glad to see you're back! :D Poor Tsuzuki and Hisoka. There's always some sort of misunderstanding between them. If only they could be more open and honest with one another these things wouldn't happen so often. Oh well, that just means that when these two finally do kiss and make up (so to speak!) it will be all the more special! :) Hopefully they won't stay apart for too long. It was brilliant for Watari to give Hisoka that book so that when Tsuzuki finally does take Hisoka he won't be going into it completely unaware! :) The harem is quite the catty little bunch aren't they! Hisoka better hurry up and make up with Tsuzuki or he's gonna live a rough life until he does! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wahh! So glad you updated! lol poor Hisoka his so quiet and timid.... Hopefully in the next chapter we'll see them two together more!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! You're back!! *hugs* I had all but given up on you. SO glad you found the inspiration to continue this! Did you and Neko Kate-chan ever settle your differences? If not, too bad. her loss. I saw on fanfiction that you were thinking about posting at mediaminer. As long as you post the juicy stuff here too, it's all good. I have accounts here and at fanfiction and don't use mediaminer so it would be a huge pain for me to have to go searching around an unfamiliar website to find you. :) I suppose I should say at least something about the chapter you wrote! LOL! The chances of Tsuzuki staying true to his vow to not bed Hisoka before he turns 18 are ludicrously low! *giggle* He wants him so badly there's no way he'll be able to hold out for 3 whole years! :D Especially given the way he was eyeing Hisoka in the bath and he nearly kissed him in the snow! No sirree, Tsuzuki won't make it! :) I can't wait to see Hisoka dance for him! That'll probably been Tsuzuki's undoing! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a good story! I love Hisoke and his so cutely naive and innocent! I feel for him already his had such a hard life... Atleast Tsuzuki is kind to him, I can't wait to see more parts with them together!!

Look forward to your next story!
person Lina
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Look what I discovered: your story!
I reeeeaaally like it! Could it be that you've posted it somewhere else before? I imagine I read something similar long time ago. But I'm not sure.
Well I really like your work and your character design. Hoho Hisoka seems so shy *gg* I love it! I hope Hisoka becomes Tsuzukis favourite *gg*? Well, usually I hate Muraki and everything he does, but this time I guess one has to thank him for giving Hisoka to Tsuzuki. I smell love in the air .... *gg*
Well, don't worry about the reviews. I saw that many people are reading your story. Unfortunately many people are just to lazy to review (usually I'm too *feelsashamed*). But I hope you still want to continue your story!
I have a question: I read that every member of the harem has a special talent like danci or something. Is Hisoka going to dance? I would like so see THAT (well, I know I can't really "see" it)! I imagine it looks very funny (sorry Hisoka ...).
Ok, I'll stop now (I feel that I have to be embarrassed onve again for my rambling ... oh well).
Good luck with your work!
Lina

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