rate_review Reviews

i apologize that the smilie seems to be teh only response i can come up with for the wonderful waffyness & slight angst.

this story continues to be really well written & i always look forward to more. ^_^

Very exciting! Please keep it up!

^_^

that's all i can think of at the moment, except that i feel a rather large rock looming in the near future -as in the next day perhaps....?

This was good. I'm really looking forward to the confrontation between Omi, Ken, and Yohji when he tells them that he and Aya are dating. Write more soon

*biggest grin EVER*
awwwwww. they're so HOT. ^_^
& u write all of the confusion of life & emotions & survivors guilt VERY WELL.
there ARE no rules to love, etc, all that jazz. Brilliant. i lot of fanfic writers give in to the 2D characters seen on the screen, u go beyond that wonderfully! ^_^

& Yohji was so SUBTLE! ^_~ lol -announcing his intentions & then just DOING it. ^_^

i can't wait for the rest.

Chapter 6 was awesome! Phone sex ... who would have thunk! Aya is making progress inside his head in getting more drawn to Yohji, and it isn't always related to what Yohji is doing to 'date' him or learn more about him. I'm really happy to see this plot line develop. I like the way Yohji is treating Aya, and he seems to have the patience of a saint. Aya seems like a kitten, starved, bedraggled and skittish, which Yohji is trying to entice in out of the rain with a saucer of warm milk (pun intended). I'm hoping he doesn't blow it (pun not intended). The phone sex was really HOT! What a stroke of genius which I've not seen in other WK fics. Bring it on!

I just wanted to say, like several reviewers before have mentioned, I like your characterization of the boys. I also am very much enjoying the storyline and am looking forward to the next installment.

Enjoyed this chapter (3) very much. Aya is the definition of prickly, but we all know why and it's in character for him to be that way. Yohji came to his senses before letting it drag out and _then_ trying to convince Aya his feelings were sincere. I think sometimes there's a little bit too much comedy around these two. A heart to heart talk got them into bed once, maybe it could straighten out some misconceptions, too. There's always this conflict between the two--which is just accepted as normal. But these are two pretty intelligent guys, and to me it seems that working some things out with words is a step toward making them _more_ three dimensional than less. Let's just hope Yohji doesn't do something really stupid like going back to clubbing and sleeping around if he doesn't get an immediate confession from Aya. I really do think he's smarter than that, and it's nice to see a story where he appears sober and sincere. It seems he knows a thing or two about Aya from having lived and worked with him for so long, and he's willing to make allowances for Aya's quirks, as well as understand his more serious personal baggage. To see them both treat each other with respect -- now _that_ would be a story. Please keep going on this, I'm engaged with the way you write them.

Ah, surprises. It was Aya who had the nightmare but Yohji was there to take him into his arms. Looks like they each did some comforting. I love it when authors write Yohji as thoughtful and genuinely interested in making sure his partner had pleasure, too, instead of the usual carousing slut he is often portrayed as. Thanks, that was a great lemon! I am encouraged that this act of tenderness and caring will lead to each wanting more. I look forward to the next chapter. I really like your Aya, too. Needing, but not needy. What an incredible gift he gave Yohji, not thinking that he might receive in kind.

Yes, much interest! Great mix of angst and warmth. I really look forward to more.